Anthony schmiedt:I am a good student,I do extra credit in class.my age is 9 I was born in Alaska.My family has moved a lot around the world.I have 3 cats and 1 dog.
Mrs. Lee
10/19/2013 11:51:31 am
Add more details about your life. For example, you said that you are a good student. Tell me things that make you a good student. Also, you stated that you were born in Alaska. Tell your audience more about that place. You mentioned how your family has moved around a lot. Provide information and experiences that you've had in the different places where you've lived. Your life sounds so exciting. Tell me more!!!
He is a good student because he takes notes,and writes more than he is suppose to. When I was born in Alaska it was 10F' I was also born at 12:00 am that probably why he is a night person(means likes to stay up.)
chaeyeong
10/16/2013 07:12:14 am
Who is chaeyeong?
My name is chaeyeong and I was born in 2004 in Janary 17th.
I went into preschool when I was 3,and I went to first grade when I was seven. in 2012 I came to America.My second grade teacher was Mrs.Moynan she was my first white colored skin teacher.My third grade teacher was Mrs.wright.She was my favorit teacher.I thought she was the kindest and coolest teacher I ever had.Now, 2013 I am in forth grade my teacher is Mrs.Lee and she is kind and funny to us.My dream is a violinist,because I want to making beautyful music.Also my another dream is scientist,because I want to make a new cretures and make madison that heals anything.So that's why I wanted to be scientist and violinist.
Mrs. Lee
10/19/2013 11:57:34 am
Don't forget to capitalize proper nouns and the first letter at the beginning of a sentence. Where were you born? Why did your family move to America? Provide information to support why Mrs. Wright was your favorite teacher. Give examples of some kind and cool things that she did. Also, I love the fact that you already dream about what you want to be when you grow up. When did you start playing the violin? What inspired you? What is your favorite piece? Have you composed or written any of your own music? You also mentioned dreams of being a scientist. Tell me what sparked your interest in that particular area. Your world sounds so exciting. Tell me more!!
Kayla
10/16/2013 08:22:11 am
Who Is Kayla Widy:
Kayla Widy is fun, crazy softball player and big sister. She enjoys drawing and playing softball. One of the positions that she plays in softball is pitcher. Kayla also enjoys drawing. She hopes to become an artist or professional softball player. Kayla enjoys spending time with her family. She has two amazing mom's and two outstanding dad's. Kayla has two sisters. The oldest sister, Rosalie is in collage at Valdosta State. The youngest sister, Alexa is in preschool. Kayla also has one older brother, Jonathan. He is a sophomore at Brookwood High. Kayla is also a 4th grade student at Craig Elementary involved in the school's chorus as well as in the church's chorus. All these qualities describe Kayla Widy.
Mrs. Lee
10/20/2013 11:28:40 am
What other positions do you play in softball? Is pitcher your favorite position? When did you start playing? Why do you enjoy it so much? Also, I was suprised to see that you aspire to be an artist. I would love to see some of your work. So, when did you discover your artist talent? What has inspired you? Give me some real examples or events that have taken place with softball and art to help me better understand your passion for the two. Also, you are blessed times two. It sounds like you have an amazing family that loves and supports you. Lastly, I see that you are involved in chorus at school and at church. Why didn't you tell me that you could sing? You are just full of suprises. You have to tell me more. If you're comfortable, I may even ask you to sing a tune in class. Amazing post!! Take time to add more details to your post. Keep up the good work.
Kayla
10/25/2013 06:14:53 am
one of the other positions I play in softball is first base and short stop. I started playing softball when I was eight years old. I first discovered I wanted to play softball when I finished playing my 2nd season of softball. I discovered I wanted to be an artist when I first started drawing in 2nd grade. As singing is concerned I started singing in chorus when I was 7. Thank you for asking all these questions I enjoyed answering them.
aaron
10/16/2013 08:36:32 am
My name is Aaron I got my name frome my dad so I am jr. I just don't like it when a sertent person calls me my nick name it is so embaresing o I got my name frome my dad
Mrs. Lee
10/20/2013 11:31:06 am
What is your nickname? Tell me more about Aaron. Why did your dad name you after him? Where were you born? Where are you from? Do you have any brothers and sisters? What do you like to do? Tell me about some of your experiences.
Dezhanique
10/18/2013 08:33:20 am
( Who is Dezhanique )? Dezhanique is a girl who has lots of imaginations, and dreams that she hopes to accomplish. Her dream jobs are to become a singer, a song writer, artist, and a clothes designer. When she first learned how to talk she started singing. As Dezhanique turned 4 years old she wrote her first song. In 1st grade Dee started sketching art then started sketching clothes. She's shy, loves to have fun, and many more. She relates to many things and people. things she likes are things like pets, video games, t.v, shopping, and more. She is many people but only 1 person {who is Dezhanique).
Mrs. Lee
10/20/2013 11:37:27 am
Oh my!! First let me say that you can accomplish all the things you listed in your post. You are such a smart and pretty girl. I am so excited to read about your dreams and aspirations, but I want you to tell me a little more. For example, where were you born? Do you have any brothers and sisters? You said in your post that when you first learned to talk that you started singing. Tell me more about that. I'm sure your mom and dad have stories, pictures or videos that they've shared with you that prove this. I want you to tell me more about that in your writing. Also, you are a songwriter. That is amazing. Tell me about some of the songs that you've written and what inspires you. Same thing with the clothes. I would love to see some of your sketches. Talk about some of your soon to be famous designs in your writing. Describe those pieces in words. Lastly, tell me more about the many personalities that make up Dezhanique. You are such and interesting and amazing person. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.
vyannna
10/19/2013 11:58:58 pm
(who is Vyanna)?
Vyanna is a funny girl. She likes to draw and hopes to be an artist when she grows up. Also, she wishes to become a doctor in the future. She is taking tennis lesson at the YMCA. She likes to stay home with her family on Sunday. Vyanna has a one year old sister, Mylynn who is very naughty, smart, and loves to move with the music. The other family members are her mom and dad. Her grandpa lives with her family who helps babysit the sister. Vyanna is bilingual; she speaks two languages which are Vietnamese and English. That is all about Vyanna.
Mrs. Lee
10/20/2013 11:45:50 am
Tell me something that you've done that others may consider funny. I'm happy to hear that you've already started thinking about your future and what you want to be. I was happy to read that you like to draw and that you want to be an artist. Maybe one day you can share some of your work with the class. In the meantime, tell me what has inspired you. When did you first discover this love for art? Are you or have you taken classes in the past to help develop this talent. Also, you talked about being a doctor. What's your inspiration here? You talked about your family a little. I know how important it is to spend time with your family. You said that you really like spending time with them on Sundays. Why? What happens on that day? Tell me more about a typical Sunday in your house. Lastly, I didn't know that you were bilingual. Who taught you Vietnamese? Also, is this a part of your family history? If so, tell me more about that as well. You are doing a great job. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more!!
Emily
10/21/2013 10:44:49 am
(Who Is Emily Warner)
Emily is shy. She loves to draw cartoons. Some day she hopes to be a pro girls basketball player. Emily is doing swim team each summer. She is going todo tennis next year. Emily has done dance sicnr she was 3 years old ,and she is now in pre-point. Emily also loves to sing ,and she also sometime wants to be a singer. She is the only child, but almost one time she was going to be a big sister. When she goes to her babysitter she asks to hold her adobited cousin (Brinly) , but if she says no Emily just plays with her.
Mrs. Lee
10/21/2013 12:23:31 pm
Where and when was Emily born? Did you start kindergarten at Craig? When did you become interested in drawing cartoons? Has this always been a fascination of yours? I would love to see some of your work. You should talk about some of the pieces that you've done in your writing. What inspires you? I was happy to read that we have something in common. We are both basketball players. I didn't know that about you. Why didn't you tell me? I would love to see you play. When did you start? Why do you like it so much? What position do you play? What teams have you played for? When did you know that basketball was something that you wanted to pursue? Tell me more about dance. What is pre-point? What genres of dance do you do? Tell me more about your family. What are your favorite things about your parents? I am so excited to hear more about your life. Keep up the good work!!
haley hartzler
10/22/2013 06:37:22 am
who is Haley
She was born in 2004.She is 9 years old and turning 10 on march 5. She loves animals and has a dog named kasey.She plays softball with kayla.She plays pitcher plays first base and batter.she loves drawing watching tv and sleeping
Mrs. Lee
10/23/2013 11:19:03 am
Where was Haley born? How was Haley as a toddler? Tell me about some specific events or things that happened during your early childhood. Also, talk a little bit about the years leading up to now. Have you done anything exciting? Have you been on any great trips? You said that you play softball. Tell me more about that. You told me about three positions that you play. Which one is your favorite and why? Tell me about a great game that you've played. Also, we have something in common. I love watching television and sleeping too!! I don't get to do it very often though. What are some of your favorite shows or movies? We have to make this interesting. You are the famous Haley Hartzler for goodness sakes!!!!
Toby
10/22/2013 08:24:49 am
My name is Toby.I am a smart person who loves sports.I mostly love Foot ball.I like the Falcons.I have one brother named,Jonah.I have one bunny named,Bently.I used to play soccer & basketball.I also did karate.I went to two schools called Deervalley & Gardenhills Elemantry.Now I go to Craig Elamantry.I am a peson who loves to play Football with my friends.I ride bus 13.I have two great two friends named Leum Stewart & Alex Diggs.I love to play four square.I play Lacrosse.My birthday is on October 12.I was born in Guatemala.I lived in Alabama,but now I live in G,A.I collect footballl cards.I like the Atlanta Braves.My favorite soccer player is Lionel Messi.I love Vanderbilt & Belmont.I had 4 dogs before.I like J.K Rowing & Rick Riordan.I like the series Harry potter By J.k Rowing.I also like the three series of the olimpians by Rick Riordan.I like my 4th grade teacher named,Mrs.Lee.I think she is the best teacher I ever had so far.I love to read.I love Takis.I like legos.My favorite singer is Justin Timerlake.I like the song he sang called:Mirrors.I am a fast runner.I have lots of cousins.more than 35.I am funny.I made it to Bronco horse shoe.I love to swim.I past my reading goal for the party.I love Nachos with cheese sauce.Thats who (Toby) is.
Mrs. Lee
10/23/2013 11:37:25 am
This is really good, but you know that I'm going to ask for more. For example, tell me about the country that you were born in and when. Why did your family move to the United States ( Talk about it only if you want to.)? Also, you started off by saying that Toby is smart. Give me some evidence to support that. Also, you talked about loving sports, and that football is your favorite. Why? What do you like about it? Have you ever played? Do you desire to play? Why are the Falcons your favorite team? Have you ever been to a game? If so, talk about that experience in your writing. Providing evidence gives your audience more information and it makes your writing more interesting. I think it's cool that you have a bunny. Did you get your bunny as a gift? If so, when? How did it make you feel. You also mentioned two other schools that you've attended and that you lived in Alabama. Were those schools in Alabama or Georgia? When did you go to those schools? If you feel comfortable writing about it, tell me why you left? What brought you to Craig? Why is Lionel Messi your favorite soccer player? What team does he play for? Have you ever been to a game? I read that you have a love for Belmont. I love that school too. I graduated from Belmont in 2005. Have you ever been? Why do you like it? Where are your four dogs now? I am also a big fan of Rick Riordan. Which book or series is your favorite and why? Now, I know that I have a lot of questions, but I have to ask about this. You said that you are a Justin Timberlake fan. I am too!! I am probably his biggest fan. I have been a fan since he was a member of the group NSYNC. That is so cool that we have something in common. Tell me why he is your favorite. If you haven't already, listen to some of his old music. It is awesome!! Ask your parents first. Toby, I really enjoyed your post. Keep up the good work!!
Toby
10/26/2013 08:17:37 am
I feel that I am smart because in 3rd grade, I got only A's in all my subjects. I am smart also because I raise my hand in class and I always get lots of the correct answers on questions. Football is my favorite sport because you get to run and it is an active sport. I like the Falcons because I think their quarterback is very good at throwing the ball to the other players. I have not played yet, but I want to play for Brookwood. I think I want to be quarterback because I have a good throw. I did get my bunny for a gift. My big brother Jonah, and I got a bunny in 2011 in December. He was an early Christmas gift.The bunny was just born when we got him. I felt happy about it.One of the schools I went to was in Alabama.The other was in Atlanta. I went to Deer Valley in Alabama for Kindergarden & 1st grade.I went to Garden Hills in Atlanta for 2nd grade and 3rd grade.We left Garden Hills because we were living in a missionary house and we could not live in it forever.We stayed at it to find a home to live.We also could not get a dog in the missionary house. Lionel Messi is my favorite soccer player because I like how he saves the ball.He moves away from the other players not on his team.He is very protective of the ball, too. He plays for Barcelona. No,I have not been to a real soccer game. Mom has taken me to Belmont, but I haven't been inside.I like it because my mom went there for college. My favorite book by Rick
Riordan is The Battle of the Labyrinth. I like it because it tells what the characters see and what they feel has happened.I thought it was cool because all of the dangers in the Labyinth were tricky. I like Justin Timberlake because I like how his voice sounds when he sings.I have heard NSYNC.I like the song Bye Bye Bye.
Faith Burke #1
10/22/2013 11:37:12 am
(Who is Faith Burke)
On July 24th, 2004 Faith Burke was born. I was at Gwinnett Medical Hospital at 6:09 am . On August 7, 2009 I went to Kindergarten at Sugar Hill Elementary. In Kindergarten I made really bad choices picking my friends. I would always get in trouble because the friend I picked always got in trouble; that is why you have to pick good friends. Also my teacher was Mrs. Reitgh .In 2010 I was in 1st grade with Mrs. Licause. Next year I am in 2nd grade and I have Mrs. Madden. Then 3rd grade Mrs. Gullion. Also 4th grade of course I have Mrs. Lee the best teacher in the world!!!!!! So about me, I LOVE SOFTBALL and I am a big sister of my sister Elyana who is 8 years old . Well let me tell you about my experiences in softball. I have been playing softball for 5 years. Also I am in a 9u softball group. If I do not hit a ball I don't give up I keep trying. I might be small but I know how to play softball. I also love to sing in chorus. It all started when I was able to talk. When I was able to talk I started to sing whatever came on the radio. And sometimes I even write songs of my own. I love to go to church and learn more about God every Sunday!!!!! Also I LOVE to READ!!!! It makes me happy when I am sad. Reading makes a lot of thoughts to come up into my mind. You can not forget that reading helps you learn more. I will always have my nickname, "little brittle". My nickname is "little brittle" because I am so short and small!!!! Faith Burke has a really good family. My father is a person who helps kids find their homes. And my other dad works on cars. And also my mom is a stay at home mom, and she helps keep the house clean. My sister as I said is Elyana and she is in 2nd grade. She is also in advanced math like I am! We have arguments but we still love each other very much (she is my best friend!!!!) I always say my mom is my friend and she says I she is not my friend and I say she is both. Also I have a wonderful dog named Baxter, he is the best dog I have ever known of. And I used to have a cat her name was Maxine but we gave our cat to my neighbor. Faith is a funny, lovable, and silly. Her favorite subjects are reading and math. Well I hope you enjoyed all of these fun facts about Faith Burke. She can make you happy by saying one word.
Mrs. Lee
10/28/2013 11:42:43 am
First of all, great post!! Make sure you have a clear understanding as to which point of view you are writing your biography from. You have a combination of first and third in your writing. If you need help understanding this just let me know. Also, provide your audience with more informaiton about Faith as a toddler. We have to provide a smooth transition from birth to kindergarten. There was life in between, so tell me about it. Try to share a story from each grade level. Those stories and events that have taken place in your life with help your readers learn more about you. They will also allow your reader to make inferences about the type of person you are and the things that you like. You mentioned that you love softball. Why? What position do you play? Share an exciting play or game moment with your audience. I see that singing is also a talent of yours and writing songs as well. Talk about your inspiration and what has inspired you to write your own songs. I would love to hear one of your songs one day. Also, who gave you your nickname? Later you mentioned a few character traits about Faith. You mentioned funny, lovable and silly. Be sure to provide evidence in your writing to reflect these traits. Lastly, I am so proud of you. Your post was great, but we can always revise to make it better. Keep adding!! I can't wait to read more.
Dezhanique
10/22/2013 01:28:37 pm
(Who is Dezhanique)? Dezhanique was born November 26, 2003 in St.Thomas v.i. She is a girl with lots of imagination and dreams that she hopes to accomplish. She wants to become a singer, song writer, actor, artist, and clothes designer. When she first learned how to talk she started singing. As she turned 4years old she wrote her first song. In 1st grade Dee started sketching art then started sketching clothes. Song writing came to her because she loves to write and it came from writing poetry to books to music but i wanted something different which led me to it. She's fun and shy. She likes pets, shopping, video games, and t.v Dee has a big brother who is sweet but drives her crazy. She's no way different and loves everyone for being them and who they wanted to be . Staying true to yourself is important because you find you (who are you) .
Blake Skinner
10/23/2013 10:53:39 am
Blake Skinner was born July 13, 2004 at 2:36am. I was born at East Side Medical Center. I live in Snellville,m with my mom and grandma. I go to Craig Elementary and I am in 4th grade. I like to play baseball and I want to play for the rest of my life. I have been on a lot of championship teams and have played in All-Stars twice. I have a black lab named Sammy. I got Sammy when I was four years old. I love her so much. She is so loving and fun to play with with. In 2010, I was in Mrs.Crowford's 1st grade class. She was a great teacher. In first grade when I was told that I was ADHD by my doctor. So now I take medicine that helps me focus, but I still have to study really hard. After school, I go to my friend Tyler's house and do my homework and play until my mom gets off work and picks me up. Tyler is my best friend. We met when we played baseball together. On the weekends, I really like to go to my Poppop's house and spend time together. In the spring, Poppop bought a boat for us and we like to go fishing together. When I grow up I want to be a Major League Baseball player. I think spending my grown up life doing what I love would be great!
Mrs. Lee
11/4/2013 10:31:17 am
First of all let me say great post. We share the same birthday month. Nice!! First, let's decide if this will be written from first or third person point of view. Next, provide your audience with more information about where you live. Try to be more descriptive. Also, have you been at Craig since you started school. Talk about some of your past or current experiences at Craig. Provide more information and examples to make your writing more interesting.
Taylor Weast
10/23/2013 11:06:40 am
(Who is Taylor Weast)
Taylor Weast is an intelligent 9 year old girl. She has 1 sister named April. Taylor has a chore every night which is doing the dishes. Taylor's favorite food is chicken fingers with ranch. Taylor loves cats and kittens. Taylor is Christian. She goes to Grace Fellowship church. She will help anyone who needs help. She can play on the piano. She is in chorus which helps her sing better. She is always busy doing something. She loves to read. Taylor has so many stuffed animals and toys. Taylor always sleeps with her gigantic bear the size of her. She has two cats named Samson (Sammie) and Gracie. She has one dog named Dobbs. Her cat Sammie will snuggle with her and will rub up against her when she is doing her homework. Taylor shares a room with her sister which was origanaly Taylor's room. Taylor has 6 cat posters in her room. Taylor's favorite subject in school social studies because Mrs. Lee makes it more fun. Taylor's favorite color is lime-green or anything Ty-dy. Taylor loves to build stuff from Legos and draw. Now you know a lot about Taylor Weast.
Mrs. Lee
11/4/2013 10:36:16 am
I agree that you are intelligent, but you need to provide your audience with more evidence/examples to support that description. Share more information about yourself and your family. Where and when were you born? You mentioned your sister, but you didn't share a lot of information about the relationship between you two. You mentioned a lot of your favorite things, but you didn't say why they where your favorites. Also, more information needs to be provided to support the things that you are telling your audience about yourself. This makes your writing more enjoyable to read. Happy blogging!!!
Addison young
10/24/2013 05:47:23 am
Who is Addison Young? My name is Addison young and I have 1 brother named Anson. I have a favorite sport and that would be tennis.
When I grow up I want to be a pro tennis player and win in the Wimbledon. Also my 2ed choice would be artist. Also I was born In South Carolina
Emma Freeman
10/24/2013 10:01:06 am
Who is Emma Freeman?
I was born on November 21, 2003 at 6:38am.I was born at Dekab Medical Hospitial. I'm originally Canadian because of my moms side. I have 6 people in my family including my there cats. My talent is art. I was inspired by my baby teacher, and she was an artist herself. I love to do painting, drawing, and hiphop.
Raphael
10/24/2013 10:38:22 am
Raphael:I was bor in the United Kingom,Kent in Europe.I Iike to read a lot.My favortite subject is math.I used to take swimming lessons.I like sports like football and soccer.I have a little sister called Michelle.She is fun to play with , but sometimes she gets on my nerves.I like to craft also I can make a few diferent things.I also like to draw.I used to run very fast.My favorte video games are Rayman Origins, Sonic Colors, Shaun White Skateboarding, and Hot Wheels Track Attack don't forget Minecraft.I'm pretty good at all of them.That's a bit of my life. : )
Alex
10/24/2013 11:24:34 am
Who is Alexander Diggs? Alexander was born on September 14, 2003 at Northside Hospital. He was named Alexander because his parents knew he'd do great things. Alexander's dad who was born in the Philippines is part African American, Chinese and Filipino. Alexander likes knowing that he too is mixed with these different nationalities . Alexander lives with his mom, dad and brother in Lawrenceville, GA. He likes to watch movies, play video games and visit his grandparents in Virgina and Florida. Alexander's favorite thing to do is play sports. He's good at football, basketball and a little baseball. He started playing his favorite sport of football for the Brookwood Broncos when he was six years old. Every year since 2010 they've won the Gwinnett County Football League Championship. They're currently trying to win for the 4th year in a row. Since 2010, Alexander as running back, has made 77 touchdowns and 34 extra points, and as line backer a ton of great tackles. Alexander has been in the Gwinnett Daily newspaper every year since 2010 because of his great work as a football player. When Alexander grows up he would like to be a running back or line backer for the Pittsburgh Steelers. Alexander is also good at science and math. He's in advance math and likes the challenge. Alexander always gets mostly A's and some B's on his report card. He believes he's good at sports and at school work because he's blessed and he always does his best. Alexander is an all around great kid!
daniel
10/24/2013 08:51:46 pm
(Who is Daniel george)
Daniel George was born on Sept. 10, 2003. His family derived from the Asian country, India. He plays soccer, even though basketball is hif favorite sport to play.He has a brother named Tommy and sister named Deepa. His parents are Wilson and Shila. In August, 2009 Daniel started kindergarten. His teacher was Mrs. Connor. In the year of 2010, Daniel started 1st grade. His teacher was Mrs. Noble. In 2nd grade, his teacher was Mrs. Harrison. In 4th grade Daniel got nice, funny, cool, and, tall Mrs. Lee! Daniel has a dog named Boss. His favorite subjects in school are math and science. He enjoys hanging out with his friends.
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Mrs. Lee is a 4th grade teacher at Craig Elementary.